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Sunset City: For Active Senior Living
By Rob Osborne
Published by AiT/PlanetLar; $9.95 USD

For those of you who collect graphic stories set in old folks' homes, Rob Osborne's Sunset City finally gives you something to file beside A Sunset in Sunshine City by Will Eisner, originally published in Will Eisner's Quarterly #6 and still available in The Will Eisner Reader.

Sunset City's main character, Frank McDonald, like Henry Klop in Eisner's tale, has recently lost his wife and moved into a retirement community at the encouragement of his daughter. Unlike Eisner's Olga Longo, though, Frank's prospective love interest Sophia doesn't simply slam her way into his life. She does her best, but he remains aloof, spending his nights grieving over his wife and his days walking his dog. His neighbor Marty, a lively fellow who wears T-shirts bearing slogans like "Geezer Power" and "#1 Grandpa," complains of a lack of movement in his bowels, but unlike Frank, he's living life to its fullest. Marty dies of a heart attack while doing a cannonball into the community pool during the ladies' water aerobics class, and when Frank reads about it in the paper, he says to himself, "I've never heard of deadly constipation. Then again, I've never heard of a deadly cannonball, except the kind that comes out of a cannon." And so, at the inspiration of the vibrant Marty, Frank decides to "take life by the balls." And that doesn't involve taking a woodworking course or joining the tai chi group at the community recreation center.

Sunset City's main storyline is intriguing, although not as developed as it could have been. This is a very brief story (aptly termed a "graphic novella" by AiT/PlanetLar), and it could have been improved with some fleshing out. A subplot involving the ongoing saga of Bonko the Clown and his adventures with the community president's daughter would have made for a highly entertaining full-length treatment in itself; Osborne's sense of humor shines through here as in many places throughout the book, particularly in the newspaper clippings that provide back-story and give a nice insight into the setting and daily life in Sunset City, Arizona. Osborne's artwork is uneven in places, reminding me on occasion of the illustrations in my high school Spanish textbook, or those little line-drawings that you might find in your car owner's manual showing what could happen to you if your airbag deploys. Certain scenes lose their impact because of the quality of Osborne's drawing, especially one scene that depicts a car plowing through a crowd of people, and its aftermath. It is more effective in other places, though, and his rendering of Sophia's aging beauty is especially well-executed.

Is it entirely fair to compare a relatively new player in the world of "sequential storytelling" with the acknowledged master of the art form? Probably not, but given the similarities between Osborne's work and Eisner's story, from the title onward, it was difficult for me to read one story without having the other in the back of my mind. In A Sunset in Sunshine City, Eisner employed his usual tightly woven, compact and economical storytelling style with his trademark twist to tell an endearing tale. In Sunset City Osborne doesn't really give us any surprises, and even the ending, which is meant (I presume) to surprise the reader, doesn't come as much of a shock. In the end, what Osborne has given us is something that starts out as a pleasant little story peppered with quirky and amusing minor subplots, and ends suddenly with a couple of gunshots and a... happy ending? In ancient societies, the wisdom of the aged was respected and taken seriously, while in Osborne's retirement community (reflecting, I'm sure, many of its real-life counterparts) the elderly while away their "sunset years," reverting to second childhoods while wishing to accomplish something important and meaningful. Our society's ambivalent relationship with its elders begs treatment and examination in whatever form, and, to a certain extent, Sunset City does just that.

According to his website, Rob Osborne's goal is to "conquer the world through comics." His 1000 Steps to World Domination mini-comic was a promising start in that direction, and Sunset City brings Osborne another tortoise-step closer to his goal. He's got the tools, and he's got the attitude. But only time will tell if Osborne's dreams of grandeur will come to fruition.

-- Jim Witt

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